Wow thats a really good poem
i know how you feel and life is all shit but karma will come round and people who have bad stuff in thier lifes will have something so wonderful they'd never have imagined! just keep writing out your feelings on paper and stay strong
amazing work keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxx

Wow that was amazing but very sad and very deeep. it has alot of emotion put in it.. i can relate thats how i feel too. it was very well writen. i relaly like it. keep writing. ur talented.. keep it up
take care
angie

........luv it!!! :)..........
love jessie aka fallen angel

Thats a good poem oh and i love tha name since its my name to!

Sis i love you and you got some good talent love ya and allways will

x x
Erika~~~~~~~~~~~~~~