Comments : Lonely

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Omg...the strangest thing....every single word of this poem describes exactly my current situation! Great poem!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Great poem
    really sad ='[
    i hope things get better and stay strong
    you are an amazing writer with a huge ammount of talent!
    greatwork keep it up
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I know what you mean, I have little self-confidence myself. I liked your poem, it's so well written, and it's clear. The third stanza was my favorite.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very say poem. And you expressed your emotions really well in this! I liked it alot!

    And I know, I know, I know
    I shouldn't beat myself up
    [I loved those lines. Repeating, "I know, I know, I know" really brought more power to the poem.]
    This was great! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.