Comments : Alone in the dark

  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Omg..this is exatcly how i feel i cant help thinking that everyday that my love is going to break up with me. but heyy greatpoem! youhave ALOT of talent loved the word's flow and rhythm =]
    stay strong
    keep up the good work
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on your poem.

    i hate to be alone
    and I'm terrified of the dark.
    thats why Ive brought you here
    to share whats in my heart.

    I really liked this stanza.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Thats really good! i love it 5/5

    xoxo kisses