Omg this poem is so sad =[
last line is so moving
you are one of thebest writers on this site!your on my faves =]
5/5
i would give you way more if i could!
amazing work keep it up
stay strong
lovelove
Alice
xxxx

I got to agree with good old Alice...you're one of the best writers on this site, well, that i've seen anyway. A truly brillaint poem. you've out done yourself again Gaillard. well done. your style of writing is rather intimidating, with all your (creativity and intellect), but i'm sure you already know that, even if you won't admit it.

Brad
Love you xx

Wow, what a fantastic poem. So sad. Well done