This is a lovely poem, nice ryhmes too.

Cute, a beautifully well written poem. I liked how you portrayed the message. Keep up the amazing work!

Aw, this is such a sweet and cute poem. It reminds me of the day my fiance and I got engaged. Thanks for sharing this poem. Great job! 5/5<---wish I could give it more

.:CiNdY:.

I hope the guy that get your heart, knows the treasure that he holds. I know it can never me be although at times even for a short time, I wish it could be.

I really like the potential of this poem.. and its not a bad poem at all please don't think im saying that.. i just think with something as romantic and filled with passion as this is that much more emotion could have been put into this poem ... a lot of it was cliche lines put together.. which happens a lot in love poems they are, in my opinion, the toughest to write.. however this is a good try.. and still a pleasant read