Well, i loved it! I guess it has a good point, i dont really know b/c i dont know your story! but i do know it was a great poem!! 5/5

Your poem sound so different from the others...and i love it.....
for some reason it's sad to read it.....

I read a poem with the same title I do believe. They both repeated the title in every stanza, which made it strong and weak. Strong for certain stanza, and weak for others. I guess this is kind of why this poem is getting rated low. But, I will give you a nice 5 :)

*high 5* !! woohoo!

Interesting way to display your first "love" but hate can spawn from misplaced actraction... so this worked well and although it didn't reach out to me i believe many others have felt the same way

I never promised to stay away
From that other girl
You saw us together one day

^ this kind of confused me i thought you were saying this from a guys point of view before i got to the bottom i still am a bit confused on "Stay away from that other girl" since if you loved a guy i would assume you wouldn't promise to stay away from a boy but i'm sure it makes sense to you

I never promised to go
To your funeral
It was stupid to think I would show

^interesting putting a funeral scene in the poem (although i hope he isn't dead) the stanza looks like it wouldn't flow with the length of the last line but it does.

I never promised to leave
Flowers on your grave
I will not even grieve

^ another brillant ending you have a way of a making the ending obvious without a feeling that theere should be more

How cruel of him >< well, try to cheer... there will be many boyfriends in your future... so is the way of .. erm 2020! Good luck