Comments : Cancer

  • 17 years ago

    by redLatina

    Oh my!!! oh God....i dont know what to say....oh baby im so sorry for that....its a great poem....tears are fallin' down from my eyes.....i cant imagine my love one die...

  • That is so beautiful, i really captures what cancer can do,
    well done, mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Felisha

    Its very sad but i like it a lot

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that was a really good poem.are you sure your 11. well anyway you could really have a future in writing poetry. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    This is an amazing poem. I love it. It made me cry. 5/5! Much love.

    -*La Little Lor Lor*

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that is so amazing
    i have lost family from cancer and i know how it feels
    i can't believe you are 11 you are amazing
    you have a future in this keep the good work up
    **chelsea**

  • 17 years ago

    by cutytothebuty

    This is so sad...and amzing!!
    you are so tallented..
    and you are onnly elevn...
    WOWW

  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Oh wow. this is absolutely amaazing. geez. i am crying. =(
    how do you write so well?
    wow. you seriously are talented.
    this had some serious emotion fingered in through those words, and i could feel the grief while reading it.
    keep the poems coming, and thanks for the comment. =)
    -farah

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I love this poem. And yes, your comment on my peom meant a lot to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I love this poem. And yes, your comment on my peom meant a lot to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dancing On The Ceiling

    OMG i love this one not because its sad but because its very well writen... no offense but i can't get over how well you write!
    i look forward to reading more from you
    best wishes good luck w/ ur bf
    taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Andi

    WOW!!! another great piece! i love your work, its really amazing and u should def keep up the good work!
    andi

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicci

    Wow this is a really good poem!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I love this its really cute!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    That is so sad, I know how you feel, my aunt just died of cancer, it's a hard thing to deal with. So much emotion, this is extremely well written, keep up the good work! 5\5
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Amazing! really well written. no getting away from the emotions in this poem! superb! x

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This is soo sad but i like it!!! KEEP IT UP

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad yet beautifully written.
    love the way you have written it.

    She kisses him lightly,
    He touches the top of her head,
    At the touch, she slowly remembers,
    All the words she never said

    She raises her chin,
    As you can imagine is hard to do,
    She says in her meek, soft voice,
    "I just want you to know, I love you."

    He looks at the monitor,
    I love you too,
    Her last breath was taken in front of him
    At least she did what she had to do

    this stanza brought tears to my eyes.
    the imagery was perfect and the flow was good.
    best wishes
    take care
    emmeline