Comments : Girl I Can Not Have

  • 17 years ago

    by gemowski

    The is a great piece i really enjoyed reading it you've got a talent. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    Awwwww The ending totally sucked ...well not the way you wrote it but to have to know that someone you admire and like goes out with your best friend...that would kill me inside...best of luck with the ladies to you, keep your chin up..theres someone for everyone!
    -Krissey

    P,S could you read "unforgettable words?"