That's reall good...

It's very sad, but a very good poem.

Very sad poem. Great Job! Just one thing, your flow seems to be a bit rough.
Keep it up

How sad....you'll find better than him soon.....

It is a perfect poem, so deep and full of emotions.
you really did a perfect job in it, you got 5/5 from me.

Its sad but gud.if u eva need to talk im here! 5/5 keep writin!

Wow, such interesting imagery and so sad. Great job.