Ooooh, a very soul searching write...I like it!
Flawless flow, brilliant imagery, and overwhelming emotion...every element that makes superb poetry. Keep it up!
Love ya~Holly

Wow Tim!! Thats really opening up. I am amazed at how you convey your feelings so well, it does not happen much with guys I have noticed. Its a very heartfelt poem . Denise

Hey Tim,
Really enjoyed this one. Loved the emotion you showed. way to open up.