Wow! This was a tad sad.

Very good though! Your flow was great, and the rhyming was also good! You two are great at writing collabs together! I'd like to have a look at your individual work too, Cause these poems from this account are wonderful!

Although this poem had it's sad parts throughout it, I thought that it had a sense of calmness to it.. If that makes sense. But I loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Excellent poem Krissy. Your faith in God comes through very clear in your poem. Thanks for reading my poem on John Denver. His songs to put you closer to the Lord and nature, I believe that anyway.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Yes, those who believe can keep their faith, and live with hope. How sad for those who cannot see a better tomorrow. Very well done. xx