Awww! This was sad. But, it was really good!

I guess it's not a fairytale ending
I guess no once upon a time
[I loved those lines, even though alot of people talk about fairytales and stuff in poems, I still liked it!]
Because Ive now been waiting for so long
[For some reason 'so' doesn't fit in there for me.. maybe say 'too long' eh, I dunno]
Good job though. It was great! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hey thats awesome, and very true. I'm sure if its treu something will be coming your way very soon. i waited and now im happy!

=) cheers & well done xoxo