I like!!!!!
chay

Beautiful job, loved the 3rd stanza

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Awww this is amazing, Travis! THis is how I feel for the one I love, thus it holds much meaning... The girl you have is very lucky. Take care.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I see a girl who's waited for the right one
And staring back is me waiting for you
^^ I loved those lines. It is filled with so much love and adoration. The flow and rhtyhm of this was really good. You had amazing word choice in this. You portrayed your emotions very beautifully. Great job on this! 5/5