Omg i love this peom!
its so well written and i loved how you had love on the last line and how you repeted but changed the verses =]
greatwrite!
your an amazing poet!
5/5
i wish i could give you more!
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

Can I say all...? Great job as always hun... keep it up!

I must say, I liked it up to the last two lines. The last two lines were just too cliche for me. I think it is better without them because then people automatically empathize with all of them.

5/5. I loved how you did this one! I REALLY LOVED THE ENDING!