This is a good piece of poetry. really great work i enjoyed it.
keep up the good work you should write more offten

Very beautiful! It had great imagry aswell!!

There's a few errors in there, but they're only site errors, you can just fix them up by editing it! It was a lovely poem. Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

The imagery was the strongest point. Not really strong with some of the words but still it did give these....vivid...images about that scene. Had a more positive air than what had been previously expected. Great imagery but still some of the...words chosen did feel slightly...not sure but there's something about some of those words that lacked a certain flair. Still loved the imagery.
~Faith