Beauty we show
Smarts and wits
Love as we grow
Into perfect fits
[I liked those lines! They were great!]
This was a good poem overall. I liked its flow, the rhyming was good also. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

What a wonderful poem....I liked your ryhmes and the sturcture of this peice! Truly a beautiful write!
-Krissey 5/5