Wow---great poem and a ton of emotion in it! Its long but once you start reading it you cant stop--my favorite line was the last one:

"Drowned in my own blood with a bullet in my head... "

Really strong and powerful---5/5

5/5.. OMG OMG OMG Even tho this was long but it was great and I loved the ending! Your so going on my favorites!

~4ever

This was the part that I liked the most:

The pain, that comes along to my body
The tears that fall down my pale cheeks
Would you take it all away, if you had the chance
Or would you look at me and just glance

It's really sad, and well written.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Aww!! thats so deep and sad im sorry its just so sad i nearly started to cry you have such good emotion in your poems xoxroxyxoxo

Your emotion is great in your poetry. It was a little long but I liked it...it some what seemed like it could have been separated into 2 different poems though.

~~Retniapdoolb

I loved your poem it was realy deep and filled with so much emotion. your poems are incredible keep writing 5/5

Lotz a luv x----xoxoxoxo--------x

Luv ~~~lisa~~~

Wow, so deep and powerful, an amazing write, keep it up
xxxxx

Wow, that poem was really emotional for me because I have experienced a suicide. It really moved me for personal reasons and I think it was really well written.