Very nice Joe! So sweet and romantic!

I love the short lines.. makes it seem... urgent...

Great work!

Wow Joe! I really liked it! really romantic. lol Keep writting! (i suck at comments lol)

I love the emotion that uve used in this. i hope it won, b/c every stanza s awesome. 5.5

I luved it...keep writing!

Wow i thought it was very sweet i loved it keep it up : )

Well this is so romantic and sweet

This is a good poem :)