Boi dat wus a gd poem 5/5
idk y u onlii gotz 2 votez =\
anyhoo im out
Peace

Lovely poem Ed Henderson. 5/5

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That was a great song/poem! at first i wasnt sure cuase it didnt flow too nicely but then the trasnition from 2nd to 3rd stanza was great and the stanza from 3rd to the 4th was perfect. i would love to see the beat for this song. this is the second poem i've commented and im going to come back and coment the rest later today but i need to go to work now. thank u so much for the coments.

Wow thats deep man! .......ha ha.

I loved the depth and the dark feel to this. I instantly thought of the grim reaper as I read it so I was quite impressed to see that was what actually inspired you. ....I don't often get these things right, I'm hopless at literature. ;-)
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