Great job on this poem! I liked the imagery and overall feeling of peacefulness you've created here. Well done!!
-Kristy (Krissey)

*Chelsey and I would really appreciate it if you would check out our latest collab, "Two voices unheard." It's under the name, "Krissey." Thank you!!

Hey thnx for the comment... i cant really come up with anything unless i am really heart broken.. so thnx... lol...
<33 whitney

This is a great poem, so calm and mellow, the imagery is great to, keep it up,
nessa

I rated this peom 5 because it is truely Magical!! xx