Wow this is like... perfect.. every word made sense together and it actually felt like i was there....

WELL DONE 5/5

[xxx]...leah...[xxx]

Morgan I like to make honest comments, you are talented way beyond your years the only neg. I see are a few grammar and spelling errors they would be just quick corrections, but they would make your poem read so much better. I go back and edit mine a lot.Check my "celestial tears" and you will see what I mean.

This is a good poem, hunny, I like it alot. I can tell you've been inspired.
Just watch out for things like spelling and grammer, k?
Goodstuff.

*Butterflyy