Comments : Death

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, "Dark Cold (what?) Filled with hate?.. I just didn't know what you were referring to..

    Great poem ! I liked it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow dark but deep! Very good... it was short, but i liked it... maybe a little more, but i get how you wanted it to be short... bravo!

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Great poem really good, I don't know how to explain it. It is detailed well!

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    That is a very good poem. The flow was nice and you have good descriptions in it--5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Not bad! I really enjoyed reading this, even if it was depressing. But it was a great poem, I`ve got no complaints. Keep it up!

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I liked this one, but it was a bit choppy, just work on your flow, you have a nice write here