Can u please rate mine and tell me what I need to work on, so I can improve on my poems?

Holy Moly Cassie! I honestly truly didn't think you could write like this...this is a really good one and Idon't really think this one needs any work. Great even though it reminds me of Brent and makes me sad *sniff sniff* but anyways I ecsp. like the end.

Cassie --
Overall, I think this poem was good. But you asked what you should work on ;; so I`m telling you.
The theme of this poem was incredibly vague ;; not until the last line did I know what you were talking about. I would add more detail and imagery.
But other than that, good job. 4/5

Samantha Hollywood

Wow this is really good. You are right "Life is a burning candle that eventually ends" i like how you put that everything has to end in a creative way! :)