Comments : Her sweet sixteen

  • 17 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    That poem was astounding!!!! I had shivers reading it all the way through.. Really great job, keep it up... LoNeLY. . . Xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good I loved how you put her feelings in presents very creative.

  • 17 years ago

    by Belle DeJour

    Love this piece!

    Touching rather! I meant, rather touching! Got me tongue tied after reading this mint piece!

    Haha. Nice piece. Lovely flow. Lovely lass aswell.

    LOVE
    xx Belle xx

  • 17 years ago

    by K-Thumper

    Very lovely poem! 5/5
    toodles mate.
    -SapphireFNevois-