Comments : Should I Use The Knife Here At My Side

  • 17 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Oh mah gosh i absolutley love it! I mean i hated myself--well still do--anyway and i thought no one would ever want to be with me-- cuz i mean i was in 3 abusive relationships and i got raped but by a close friend! Yeah you may be thinking,"Why is she telling me all this?" but i mean i found some one that loves me and so on! I would always think about wat you wrote about before! But be you--and maybe you are but like i really don't know you--anyway take care and don't ever wanna kill your self or harm your self it's not fair for you and/or your family! Oh and if this poem is not true then i'm really sorry for writing all this and yeah!
    ~*~Cindy~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Shelby

    That is not bad it's good i can feel the way the poem is ment to be felt it's really good

  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Powerful and heart breaking, very realistic, its like this poem fits every relationship I've had. Superbly written, expressive emotion, wonderful to read.