Love is a cycle. I've read that in a cover of a Bible when I was small..

"I bowed not to love again"'
"funny my heart said"
For it keeps on beating

and beating

and beating..

God Bless!

I liked it!

Hey!
Great poem, well done! Reading your older poems, compared to your newer ones you have definatly improved!

5/5

~Murder.

Thats a nice poem!
and its nice how you wrote your feelings down amazing work

Wonderful job.. i love the happy and ready to love again vibe.. great work :D

Hmm
i kinda got off focus reading this
it didn't really trick my trigger
if you no what i mean

Nice poem with flowing mournful feelings. I would have really caught you on the grammar part but the poem being in slang category its ok. Keep it up dear. tc

Nice job. There are some questionable punctuation and some grammatical errors. Keep it up

Um i'm not sure what to think of this piece I think I know what you were trying to say but everything just seamed a little bit off.

I really do not knwo what to say about this poem, it was good, the flow was good the rhyming was good so it was a good poem i just do not know what else to sya baout it.

It seems like a nice poem, but it needs a littel work on it. Something about it didn't seems right to me. Maybe if you worked on it a bit, it would look better. 4/5

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