Comments : What's this for?

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ahhhh..so much questions...that keeps me wondering.
    Absolutely good work, the flow was fluid...

    For me this might be one of ur best..
    The ending could use a little tweaking but I don't know. Its good the way wrote it.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow....wow wow wow. I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Woow love the imagination going on in this poem :D:D

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Excellent!!!!!! This poem was wonderful it was easy to follow and it was filled with emotion. This is one of your best ones. Keep writing them like this and I'll keep reading hun. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another great poem.. i love it .. it makes you think about the answers to these questions.. the only thing is that some seemed unnecessary .. like you only put them in the poem because it rhymes

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I can tell how much you've improved
    but this poems a lil weak
    and i think that you repeated words alot which made it sound funny

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is extremely great. Such a beautifully written poem. The rhetorical questions really made me to ponder and cudgel my brain. I kept me engaged. max ratings dear tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is my favorite piece from you so far it has good flow due to the reputation it has a clear message and a lot of emotion.

  • This is a really good poem. I love the way you wrote it. Great job! 5/5

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