Very good message and most adequetly represented... 4.5 stars. Almost 5 gut, eventhough I understood what you were saying, it seemed to jump around alot but you have the talent and I know you can develop it more. Believe me, I have been sh*tted on when developing my short stories for publication and even though I have met success, I still get sh*tted on.

charles "In everything I am an outsider"-H.P. Lovecraft.

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