Good poem. Very true human kind is killing nature and all the animal life. Someday humans will destroy the earth if they keep this up.

Very nice acrostic Noni!!

Your word choice in this was fantastic!! Not a thing I would change!! Keep it up! 5/5 =)

`Taleee. xx.

Was an interesting poem to read, though the last line confused me slightly, either way, nice going, keep your writing up

Wow.. that is really good.. You described everything very well and I love the imagery that you had in this. My favorite lines were:
Amiss black clouds flooding urban cities
Slaughtering rain engulf retreating life
Those really stood out to me! Great job on this! I loved it! 5/5