Impressive...congrats...i'm speechless anyway 5/5 :*

Awesome poem!!
I love the ending!!
Your really talented :)
5/5

Jen X

I...man...firstly let me just say that this was really, really good. It had been well written and had this dark undertone. The words were really cool and had this flow that felt smooth. There had been spelling errors but the flow and words and concept overwhelmed that fact. Really enjoyed and thought that this was really, really cool. Nice piece that had something really great in it what with the word.
~Faith

Shadowy as moonless night, so its brilliance is all the brighter. Great poem.