Comments : All alone

  • 17 years ago

    by RAWR.

    Great quotes although if you were to expand GREAT poem! (:
    Later

    Jana.

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Survival, Forsaken and Truly were spelt wrong, apart from that, it could have been improved by being just a few lines longer, I think.

    Apart from that, it did a good job of showing that you were scared and alone.

    //T.L.//