The time thyme
very strong. again 5/5 from me.

I absolutely love the last stanza. It is a great end to the poem. I also love the beginning with the parallel structure. Great write-I enjoyed reading it! 5/5

What it's supposed to be about is kind of vague but I love the play on words a lot.

Wow. slightly confusing, but this poem intrigues me.. I would say 5/5 just for being interesting. =D

Aww.. i loved this poem! the layout really adds affect and draws the reader in.. the idea of this poem and the rhymes were amazing.. keep up the great work! 5/5 p.s. lol.. im a girl, i just like to write love poems in a guys perspective.. :P