Comments : A Time

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    The time thyme
    very strong. again 5/5 from me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I absolutely love the last stanza. It is a great end to the poem. I also love the beginning with the parallel structure. Great write-I enjoyed reading it! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    What it's supposed to be about is kind of vague but I love the play on words a lot.

  • 13 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow. slightly confusing, but this poem intrigues me.. I would say 5/5 just for being interesting. =D

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. i loved this poem! the layout really adds affect and draws the reader in.. the idea of this poem and the rhymes were amazing.. keep up the great work! 5/5 p.s. lol.. im a girl, i just like to write love poems in a guys perspective.. :P