Omgosh Another great poem..
I really loved that, it had so much feal to it..
It's like there's a musical note in every word.. That put's together a totally awsome song..
Well done
5/5 again

GR8 poem! u got a gr8 rythme for it. the emotions r vey deep. i feel like around my family. keep writing:)

Great poem. It was excellent the whole way through. the rhyming was good too.

&& thanks for the comment

Great job dudette. I liked this 5/5
-Kakashi