Now your gone, he's come for me,
[Should be "you're"]
You realize I'm not coming back to this place,
There was no better place than there with you,
[You've said the word "place" twice so close together. Maybe try and change one of them.]
But I'm gone forever, my life is lost,
All because I got jealous.
[That second line didn't make sense. I don't think it really goes with the poem.]
Its to late now, so I'll say goodbye,
[Should be "too"]

It was a pretty good poem though. I thought it was really good. yeah. You also used great imagry. Keep it up! And thanks for the comment. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hey andree, great poem. i loved it, you expressed yourself so truthfully.best wishes,dannielle

Some spelling errors and maybe a line or two that didn't quite go with the rest. But well it had been quite good. It really had this hook that made it worth reading. Some nice words and some cool lines that just stood out. Really looks like you're going to produce some really cool pieces. Imagery was awesome because it had this vivid intensity that was really used to the best advantage. Great job.
~Faith-less

Dont diss the man...his poems are from the heart.. andree u rock..

_Dookie_

Makes me cry everytime i read it...
your poeticism is outstanding...
makes ya think tho,how much ppl would care if ya were gone forever..
i love this poem..

Pritty cool...and who gives a **** about spelling gez any 1 would think this was a spelling bee... well done VERY sad...:-( well done