Awww! I really liked that! Finish it and I'll be back to read the rest! Great Job! Thank you for the comments!

Hey i like this poem keep up the good work!!!!

Wow you are an awsome writer for your age. sorry i didnt answer your comments earlier i have been a bit busy but i thank you for leaving comments on my poems. i also added you to my fave list and i hope you keep writing cuz ur amazing x3 kandy

Wow, what an awesome poem. You are doing really well for you age. keep writing, in a couple of years you will be astounding.

Wow. That's deep. . . I think it's going to end with an awsome finish. Definetly.

Jessica-

I really like your poem..It seems as if I can relate to it! Keep writing them, your good at it. Thanx for the comment you left me.