I tried my best to look away
But my gaze refused to shift
I knew I shouldn't stay
But my feet I couldn't lift
[I really liked how you worded this stanza, it was great]
This poem was really good. I've been in this situation and I know how much it hurts. But you've done a great job on this poem. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I like how emotionally real this poem is.
i've thought about how I would feel if I was in this situation and just the thought hurts. It really is a great poem.

I really like ur poem

Very well written. Its a stab in the heart and a dream that won't go away, I know , am living that nightmare

The theme of this poem is great, i like the concept and how everything flowed together and how you organized it... keep up the good wrk!!!

Wow

i really liked this poem
it was very touching
ive been in that place of my life too
you be strong to get though it
life does get better even though you feel it doesnt

5/5
well done

I like that

Awww sweetness
this is very wonderful!
great piece of work
you did a wonderful job..all the words were perfectly chosen and the flow of rhyme was amazinf~~
I think I've never read your poetry, its my 1st time so I'll try to read others soon =)
Keep it up
Wish you good Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxx

Lol aww.. This is good.. wow you are soo going on my favorites