This is so so sad...but even sadder is the fact that many people, including me, feel this way. Regardless, I think this was an exquisite poem and you definitely have abundant talent. Good luck in the future.

Huni this was really sad. very touching =(

Wow. I am in awe of u. This poem was amazing, and it truly touched me. I know I have felt like that many times before. But somehow hopes always comes back. I hope u dont seriously give up on love all toghether. Because if u get it right, its the most amazing thing ever. Thrust me on this. Anyway, great job. Loved it. Keep it up :)