Omg wow this is such a good poem!
your an amazing writer!
keep up this great work =]
5/5
stay strong
lovelove
Alice
xxxxxx

Good poem Freddie! Very sad poem but it is good. It really conveys the feelings of the poet. Keep up the good work with your poems. Thanks for your comment on Smoking and the Big C.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Wow your poem was really good, youre an awesome writer, and I can really relate.
5/5

Hey thanks for the comment on my poem! ur poems are all really good, and u shudnt stop writing :) jess xxx

Hey freddie!! still totally love this poem!!! Great structure...excellent rhythm..great content...and my favorite poem in your collection! Go italy!! looks like they have some great schools over there!!! keep it up freddie..you are gonna be a star!!!!
Love ya shery