Wow. I'm speachless. This was so good and so emotional. Wow!!

I really liked how you repeated that same stanza at the start and end. Thought it gave the poem abit more power. The imagry was also good.

Sadly, I can relate to this. Though I hope this is nothing based on you. Keep up the great work and smile =) 5/5 && Thank you for your comments.

`Taleee. xx.