So so that it seems
[I didn't quite understand that line with the two 'so']

But, again. You really put your emotions into this. And I can relate to it alot aswell. I hope it's not true though for you. Keep up your great work, hun. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Sad...but unbelievably good! You loaded this pome with emotion, and the flow is superb. I have absolutley no critiques-the poem is perfect!! 5/5 Keep it up-you undoubtably have talent-

I can really relate to this poem. You really put your emotions in it and that makes it really great. Once again, this poem was great. I loved the flow nad everything.