Aw wow. That was really sad. and sadly I can relate. alot. You really put your emotions in this one. It was sad.

Laying on the cold dark floor
I have no hope anymore
[I liked those lines alot. Thought they were great!]

Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

You put so much emotion into this poem! The flow is nice except for the now, how, now, how thing--It wasnt bad but it could be improved. Amazing write. definately a 5/5

Wow, it is so touching, i can relate to it. great job again i gave you 5/5 but it deserve more.
great job

I can relate to this one as well. It was sad, but i liked it a lot. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up. 5/5