Very sad poem. But, you showed how much you really care for your brother. And, for me. That makes this poem great. It was a tad short, and you could have gone deeper. But I did like it the way it is. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow....very deep. You did a great job with the flow --Great write-it is flawless!
5/5

Great poem i really like it and your message is clear.
great poem 5/5

It's sad, but you really care about your brother. I liked it. It really shows how much you love him. Keep it up. 5/5