I thought this was good, 4/5.

the rhyming, perhaps could have been more complex, and the flow was a little jagged, but other than that i thought it was good :D i connected with it easily

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IN THIS LINE:
Learning to live though death
I think you may have meant 'through' instead of though...posibbly?

Anyways on with my thoughts...
the flow was great although i think you could express the same sentiment using a different variety of words other than the repeated shes learning...it may hold the readers attention a lil easier and avoid so much repetition.

this line was used at the beginning of each stanza but also in the poem.
i like the way you structured the poem starting with: Shes learning to fall...for each stanza it really exaggerated the struggle of how this woman will survive!
Very inspirational to those who ar trying to move on with their lives after loosing their soul mate!

GREAT JOB!! aww this was such a cute poem! I really liked it -- I like how the subject of the poem is learning to cope with loss. I think its great! Awesome job, keep it up.
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Wow, nice poem as life is all about learning. if we don't we just have to suffer.

This is a really good poem. It flowed nicely and I really like the topic of it. The only errors I found are these two (Laura already caught the first one):

''Learning to live though death''
Though should be through
''Live without hiim''
hiim has an extra ''i''

Besides this it is perfect! Great write---5/5

LOVED this poem :D

some of your rhymes were a little ordinary, but i really really liked this line:

"Learning to breathe
Through another last breathe"

Well done girl! keep it up :)

This had a wonderful flow and a really sweet theme. The only thing I'm personally not keen is the limited vocab.

Cool, I liked the title of this poem. It really did catch my eye. Rhymes were alright, good stuff.

Aww.. that was good.. usually i dont like it when people use a lot of repitition but this worked well.. its a very good life poem and was very inspirational! good job! 5/5