Awww!! That was cuuuuute.

Although I thought Haiku's were only about nature? Anywho. I loved it. It was sweet. And yesh. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

You are correct a Haiku is only about nature, so I changed this poem to a Sedoka.

Peace, Joe

Lol.. Nice Sedoka =P

Mmkay. I thought I should leave a real comment this time.

In love forever more
[It has 6 syllabes. Should have 5.]
Hearing the waves upon the beach
[It has 8 syllables. Should have 7.]

Maybe try and re-word it or something. Iuno. It was good though. Probably better than my Sedoka.

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Nice poem ;) great job !

Nice poem, i love your poems
they all are intresting and writen very well
keep it up ; )

Here you have painted a great picture of love......very romantic....5/5 like always