Candlelight Dinner

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Jul 3, 2006


Tension rise from my pounding heart
as the candle flickered in the darkness
Champaigne bottles glimmered about
as the atmosphere filled with calmness

You reached for my tender hands
Lifting them to your sensual lips
Then raising my cup to my mouth
Gently you watched me sip

Soft mellow music echoed through the night
You grab my slim fragile waist
Whisking me away into a dream
Engulfing me in sweet love's taste

Your whispers caressed my drowsy ears
as you kiss upon my neck and cheek
Soft hands embraced my body tightly
Then my eyes and knees grow weak

A candlelight dinner filled with passion
Twirling around in a lover's glee
Soothing touches of a strong man
Taking in blissfully all of me

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  • 17 years ago

    by GreenxTea

    I liked the imagery a lot. it was really pretty. it could have used more punctuation, though.
    i loved the idea that came across as i read it, it was lovely!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
    This was an amazing write. The imagery created is sensual and I felt like I was reliving a past experience of my own! You know youhave talent when you can evoke that kind of emotion from a reader!! Excellent write!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxxxxxxmary

    I like this alot

  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice. I liked it alot

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow that was so well written that the whole setting of the poem calmed me down--This is perfect. I dont have anything that you could change to make it better--Amazing imagery and flow--Beautifully written! 5/5

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