This is really good! i love it! good job sweetness...ur talented!

Hey darl a touching piece very well written. great use of words xx

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Wow this poemm isss amazingg*
5/5 for sure!!

AWWW how sweet :)

I love the way you used your imagination,,, its soo good girl you really got the talent,,,

"The way your eyes roam my body
The fire and desire you make me feel"

I loved that stanza :D