"Life is too short to end it this way.
There are more to life than what they see."

i agree, but u also have to put yourself in their shoes. i used to feel like there was no reason to live... that nothing was ever going to get better. but i fought and here i am, happier than i ever thought i could ever be.

so, although i completely understand ur point of view, think about what some have to go through (physical and verbal abuse,...)

amazing poem though. looking forward to reading more!
-xXx-

Very true

You write pretty good! I like it!
My poem was like describing the problems of the present that barely happened then i remember the past when we both meet. With a little of the lost i was cause she has to travel to meet us. And then finally describe that i never regret of have picked her to be the one of my life. But was just love we slept together omiting sex. We haven't even done it!

Thx for commenting! meant too much to me!

Charlie

This is another awesome poem. I like the way you express your thoughts. They don't have to rhyme to be good. Then you get more out of it. Great job. 5/5