Thats a wonderfull poems spoken from the heart and so much passion i love this you have a wonderfull talent and i love your poems xoxroxyxox

It was a good write packed with emotion, however I felt the flow seemed interrupted at some points but it could just be the spelling. There were some spelling mistakes other than the Ur that I noticed.
All in all it was a great write!

Hey, thanks for the vote and comment...I've been going through a rough time now...the Poetry I write isnt from my mind..its from my heart and what it tells me. nice poem here btw. thanks again. ttyl. bye