Sarah-(this is Sierra-my other account got suspended). I don't know your mom but she's obviously doing something wrong. Does she even know you have this kind of talent? You should show her your poems, not necessarily this poem if you don't want...

You deserve a million times better!!!

Hey! i really like this poem its so well written and i love all your other poems! 5/5

I pray that I could disappear
Without you, mother, standing here
[I really liked those two lines. It's kinda how I feel about my mother.]

I thought this was a great poem, Sarah. I don't see any rocky area's. The flow was good, your rhyming was good. It was a great poem overall. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awww hun. this is very heartfelt
I so loved your poem, its so wonderful...your sad poems are sooo heartfelt, even your love poems are captivating and perfect
you're such a great writer yourself, I wish you the best
Luv
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