Comments : Her brother...

  • 17 years ago

    by megan

    Wow thats a really powerful poem
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hilary Day

    This was very good.. I really do enjoy your work..Kepp them coming..

  • 17 years ago

    by ebony

    Hey this is a realy nice poem, im sorry if the events in this poem were true.. .

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Oh my god. I'm in love with this poem. It litterally brought tears to my eyes. Awesome job. And don't stop writing. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    Awwwwww thats sooo sad yet soooo good!!!!! Excellently written....5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love this poem. well written, sad, simple. great job